Wednesday, 28 May 2014

My Creative Writing

WALT:write freely and try new things.

I chased the animal until I reached a magical land full of unicorns that vomit rainbows and poop butterflies. It was full of lollies and all kinds of syrup. One fat one of the unicorns talked to me it said
" hello my name is Butterscotch."
It asked for a phone I said why it was because it wanted take a selfie with you.
I said ok and we took a selfie together.
Suddenly I turned into a unicorn my name was caramel sparkles. I liked myself and I tasted like caramel sauce. Then I woke up I was so upset. 

Next step:put more detail in my writing. 

Thursday, 22 May 2014

Going To Dream World.

WALT: elaborate our ideas.

" No, I don't want to" I said to my patient Grandma with a croak in my voice.

Wait a minute you don't think I am going to tell you what happened next. Let me take you back to early September 2012.

Good you're here let's begin then. I woke up to a call of "Room Service."

I was so drowsy that I couldn't even keep my eyes open for more then 20 seconds.

Finally, properly woken up I remember about the room service. Yay my Grandparents got me my absolute favourite breakfast ever, bacon and egg omelete, mmm bacon. I had just remembered that we were going to Dream World today, yay. I rushed outside then I forgot i had not done my hair so  I ran back inside to do it.

Later that day at Dream World, with my hair done.

"Wait!" I say to my Grandparents as we looked at the massive queue.

We enter at the back of the line but because ofhow far back I was I could see practically the whole theme park. It was awesome.

After being on many fun filled rides we were finally at the very last ride, the log ride. It looked like it was 1 million miles high.

"No i don't want to ." I say to my patient Grandma with a croak in my  voice.

I finally picked up the nerves to go on it. At first it was pretty nice then as the cart went up the hill I heard it click and clack and snap. My stomach turned and I thought I was going to die. Will it break?

"Ahhhh!" I screamed as the old wooden ride.

Suddenly, my feelings changed and I screamed with joy as we went down the ride that felt like it was going 1 million miles ph. We were soaked .

In the end I had an awesome day I hope Sea World will be this fun.

Next Step: Paragraphing my ideas.

Monday, 19 May 2014

My Reading

WALT: Read for meaning.

We read a text about why Zebras have stripes.
We completed a task of trying to convince people why Zebras have stripes this is what I came up with:

Zebras have stripes to shoo flies away the flies prefer solids over stripes. Stripes don't camouflage Zebras in woodsy areas. Biting flies spread diseases to Zebras and horses so luckily because of the Zebras stripes the bloodthirsty flies will stay away.

Next Step: but more detail in it.

Friday, 16 May 2014