Monday, 4 May 2015


In August the storm screams at our shivering houses.
In August my fluffy blanket is like a sheepskin comforting me.
This winter is somewhat warm.
The shimmering snow shines in the light of the crisp sun.
Cuddling up with my blanket and delicious hot chocolate was nice, but lonely.
The dull, cold air makes winter scarier.
August is strange.

The language features I used were Personification, Simile and Alliteration because they are some of the harder language features to use.
The solo level I am at is Extended Abstract because I can use several language feature correctly and I can identify them in a poem.

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