Thursday, 12 March 2015


WALT: Write a narrative.

We had to write an added paragraph to our class book, Wonder.

Beep, beep, beep went the racing heart monitor as i'm rushed through the packed emergency room. I enter my room and the suddenly frantic doctors flood in the now sweaty doctors try to quickly work out what is wrong with me. While they are doing that i'm bawling my eyes out. My tears feel like a waterfall streaming down my face. They are dripping onto my Luke Skywalker star wars t-shirt.

Finally the doctors and nurses figure out what's wrong with me. I get the horrifying news...

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